A poem.

This is a writing prompt of sorts, because I haven’t written a solid poem in a little while. I can’t really say what my inspiration was.


I’m in your presence.

But I can’t feel you there.

Your eyes lack their brilliance

As if you are elsewhere.


“Come back to me”

I plead: my words and my prayer.

Perhaps we’re not exactly meant to be,

It’s hard to know that you still care.


I told you I could be brave and strong,

Feelings that have long been lost.

Who was wrong?

Now we have both silently paid the cost.


~ by TheFirstLightofSummer on January 21, 2011.

2 Responses to “A poem.”

  1. I like this poem 🙂 But it seems sad. 😦 I can’t tell if it’s supposed to be about God or someone else…

  2. It’s not really defined by like a certain person, more like when any kind of relationship goes through like a rough patch, whether it be a friendship, love, or even with God. I guess it really could be anything…Thanks for reading it. 😀

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